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Shioko by Inlinverst Shioko by Inlinverst
For :iconraikonkitsune: 's contest raikonkitsune.deviantart.com/j…
Their OC Shioko
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Nice composition, lots of action, it reminds me of a comic book cover.
Your lighting focuses more on specular highlights than diffusion and shadow. I think it would jump off the page more if you changed the lighting angle (assuming jumping off the page is what you are going for)
I wish it had a background, that would help the jump factor as well.
The hair is in one big clump and doesn't add a lot of character.
Her left shoulder seems to bulge a little, I think she needs more bicep.
Her right knee seems to be twisted 90 degrees.

Keep working, you defiantly have above average artistic skill.
If you love it and work hard someday you will be a master.
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:icong4mm43t4:
G4MM43T4 Nov 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
i do like her pose
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Inlinverst Nov 6, 2013  Student Filmographer
Thank you!
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G4MM43T4 Nov 10, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
you're welcome, fellow deviant
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RaikonKitsune Nov 5, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
amazing :D the pose and the outit are soo cool *-*
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Inlinverst Nov 5, 2013  Student Filmographer
Thank you so much!
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NightChao Nov 4, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
very cool pose, and coloring!
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Inlinverst Nov 4, 2013  Student Filmographer
Thank you very much! :)
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